Bonnie Wynne https://bonniewynne.com Science Fiction and Fantasy Author Fri, 22 Sep 2023 04:13:31 +0000 en-US hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.4 193628005 Drumroll, Please: “The Last Sorceress” is Here! https://bonniewynne.com/2023/09/22/drumroll-please-the-last-sorceress-is-here/ Fri, 22 Sep 2023 04:11:56 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1490

Hey, Gwyn enthusiasts and blood magic fans! If you’ve been hooked on my spellbinding The Price of Magic series, prepare for the jaw-dropping finale you’ve all been waiting for! 🎉

Published on 16 March this year, “The Last Sorceress” is the epic conclusion that brings a spectacular end to this incredible journey.

A Journey Worth the Wait

Writing this series has been a monumental journey, to say the least. From Gwyn’s harrowing battles against the risen dead to the fracturing, to some hardcore sorceress vs. sorceress action, it’s been a narrative close to my heart. “One sorceress fractured the world. Two may be enough to doom it.” I can’t wait for you to see how it all unfolds.

My Characters, Your Heroes

Gwyn, Alcide, Lucian and the whole cast have lived in my imagination for years, and bringing them to life on paper has been a surreal experience. I’m incredibly excited for you to delve deeper into their lives, trials, and the difficult choices they have to make, especially as lives are lost and ancient enemies align for the final showdown.

A Massive Thank You!

I couldn’t have come this far without the unwavering support from all of you—my readers, friends, and family. Your enthusiasm, reviews, and word-of-mouth recommendations have been the magical ingredients to the series’ success. Thank you for accompanying me on this remarkable journey.

Why You Shouldn’t Miss the Grand Finale

The conclusion of the Price of Magic saga answers the questions you’ve been dying to know and poses new ones that’ll have you pondering long after you’ve turned the last page. Magic comes at a price, and in this final book, you’ll find out if Gwyn is ready to pay it.

So, What Are You Waiting For?

With the fate of the world hanging in the balance, “The Last Sorceress” promises an exhilarating end to this magical journey. Get your copy here.

Till our next magical adventure, 📚✨

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The Stars Beyond the Stone https://bonniewynne.com/2022/04/24/the-stars-beyond-the-stone/ Sun, 24 Apr 2022 12:11:20 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1484 Did you know the fourth book in the Price of Magic saga is coming out in just a few short weeks? I know!! Where does the time go? For me, that means a lot of work making blog posts and newsletters and cover reveals and promo materials… but for you, it means it’s a great time kick back and get up to date on the rest of the series.

If you haven’t read Book 3, The Stars Beyond the Stone, now is the time. You can get it as an ebook, a paperback, an audiobook; you can get it any old how. Matter of fact, I’ve got it now.

In case you’re wondering what it’s about, here’s the short ‘n sweet:

The Scions roam free, and only the sorceress can hunt them…

After the battle with storm god Molech Suun, a city is in ruins and a new Archmage holds the Syndicate’s leash.

But while Gwyn has accepted her fate – to hunt down and destroy the remaining Scions – her loyalty is still to her old master Faolan, held captive by a cunning necromancer.

Saving Faolan means leaving the wizards and the Clockwork City behind.

With the shapeshifter Lucian at her side, Gwyn embarks on a dangerous journey across the sea, to lands where pirate kings rule and wild magic sings.

But sorceresses are heir to a dark legacy of blood – and Gwyn soon finds that she’s the one being hunted.

The Scions want her dead, and a new enemy sends threats and warnings that can’t be ignored.

As Gwyn struggles to balance her desires and her destiny, she finds herself unprepared for what awaits her beyond the city walls.

And far to the south, amid the ashes of a fallen kingdom, a familiar foe is setting deadly plans in motion…

The Stars Beyond the Stone is the dazzling third instalment in Bonnie Wynne’s epic fantasy saga, The Price of Magic.

And if that’s not enough to whet your whistle, how about a totally free prequel novella? Just sign up to the Talem Press newsletter and get it delivered straight to your inbox. I don’t get paid for this. Nobody does. It’s a gift, straight from my brain to yours.

Before the Ninth Sorceress, there was…

Ailbhe Ahriddin. A name steeped in blood. An empire poised to fall. And a sorceress at war with the monster inside.

Torn between two destinies, with her world on the brink of annihilation, Ailbhe must choose whose side she’s on… and what she’s willing to sacrifice for the people she rules.

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Aurealis Award Nominee! https://bonniewynne.com/2021/04/19/aurealis-award-nominee/ Mon, 19 Apr 2021 02:04:05 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1461 Have you heard the news? Netherfield Park is let at last — and The Ninth Sorceress is an Aurealis Award Nominee! Yep – she’s up for Best Fantasy Novel of 2020.

I am, to say the least, amazed. Small first novels from indie publishers don’t usually get noticed for any kind of awards, much less the most prestigious genre awards in Australia. The other nominees in my category include past winners, super-popular authors from big publishers, and, um, GARTH NIX. Absolutely bonkers that I used to read his books after school in the library and now I’m running against him in the country’s biggest fantasy award.

As the underdog I have no expectation of actually winning my category, but I’m thrilled to be nominated. When I got the news on April 1st I was pretty sure I was the victim of an elaborate April Fools. Me, Bonnie Wynne, sitting at the table with the best writers in the biz.

BIG thank you to the judges who put me there, and the readers who’ve been so wonderful in supporting my little wizard book. It’s probably the most exciting thing that’s ever happened to me. So, you know. Thank you.

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The Price of Magic Quintet https://bonniewynne.com/2021/02/11/the-price-of-magic-quintet/ Thu, 11 Feb 2021 00:15:58 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1436 Big news for sorceress sympathisers. I’ve officially signed with Talem Press to produce books FOUR and FIVE of the Price of Magic saga. This baby is a quintet!

Book 3 will be out later this year, and I’ll have more info about titles, covers and release dates as we get closer. But before then, my mailing list subscribers will be getting something very cool and very free. Sign up below so you don’t miss out.

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Shopfront now live! https://bonniewynne.com/2021/02/09/shopfront-now-live/ Tue, 09 Feb 2021 23:38:36 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1432 I’m a savvy business woman, making savvy business moves. You can now buy my art directly through my website. Right now there’s one (1) product available, but who knows what I might add in the future?

Payment is via Paypal, so I can’t steal your credit card information. Which honestly sounds like a fun scam. But I can’t do it, so that’s fortunate for you. Price is in $AUD and inclusive of GST. If you’re local and want to pick up your purchase from me, contact me directly so we can arrange payment without shipping.

Check it out via the Shop link in my menu above. Does The General belong in your home? If so, make him yours today.

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A Wind From The Rift now live! https://bonniewynne.com/2020/11/19/a-wind-from-the-rift-now-live/ Thu, 19 Nov 2020 05:00:00 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1380 The long-anticipated – (or at least, anticipated for the last few months) – sequel to The Ninth Sorceress is out today. Hurrah!

In case you’re not up to date, here’s the synopsis:


The sorceress has broken free of her shackles.

Months of imprisonment have forged Gwyn into something new; something dangerous. Eight dead sorceresses whisper in her ear, hungry for blood and vengeance – and after unleashing the red magic to make her escape, she fears she won’t be able to stop.

All Gwyn really wants is to go home. But as she soon discovers, escaping the Clockwork City may prove an impossible task. The wizards of the Syndicate wage a silent, bloody war over her fate, and to survive, she must play their deadly game.

As strange storms ravage the city and wizards start turning up dead, Gwyn finds herself in more danger than ever. With enemies on every side, the immortal Scions massing their armies, and the dark power inside her growing stronger, she must make a choice… To save everything she loves, is she willing to become the monster the Syndicate fears?

A Wind from the Rift is the electrifying second volume in Bonnie Wynne’s spellbinding fantasy series, The Price of Magic.


And here’s what the coterie of brilliant advance reviewers are saying:

Dianne from Tome Tender says:

Dark, grim and yet, still spell binding, this addition to the series is just as emotionally taut, richly detailed and raw as book one, but this time out, Ms. Wynne has stepped up her game and enriched the story into a finely woven fantasy with an ever stronger heroine… Brilliant creative writing has gone into this tale and the author has done an amazing job of letting readers become part of the story. Highly recommended fantasy for all ages.

Nikki (Read and Wander) says:

Wynne’s writing is dynamic and held a few twists I had not seen coming. While I was hooked from the very first chapter, the last third of the book was the definition of ‘unputdownable.’ It was like being on a bullet train that hit stop speed… then the breaks go out. I could not stop reading until I reached the end… at 3am. THAT ENDING. THAT ENDING!!

Kat (Bookish Blades) says:

The characters, the fast pace and the magic were an amazing, delicious mixture. Even though I had to get back into the story first, once I was, the book transfixed me and I read it in two sittings. I could not stop reading, it really was a bit addictive. For me, it was the perfect second book!

Can’t wait to share with you all! Let me know what you think. I’m on Instagram at @itsbonniewynne, or just leave a comment on my web-zone.

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Cover Reveal: A Wind from the Rift https://bonniewynne.com/2020/08/31/cover-reveal-a-wind-from-the-rift/ Mon, 31 Aug 2020 22:42:32 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1371 No commentary. Just feast your eyes. Feast them!

This electrifying beauty – Book 2 of The Price of Magic saga and the sequel to February’s The Ninth Sorceress – will be out on 19 November 2020 in eBook and paperback for both Australia and international.

You want the blurb? You want to know what the book is about? You want some clue as to the magnificent and heart-stopping contents contained herein? You want to know who Gwyn is going to wreck and how she’s going to wreck them?

Head on over to Goodreads to find out! And don’t forget to add her to your TBR list while you’re there. Because we all love a bit of buzz.

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Announcing: ‘A Wind from the Rift’ https://bonniewynne.com/2020/07/03/announcing-a-wind-from-the-rift/ Fri, 03 Jul 2020 00:16:03 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1362 Aaaaahhh!

I’m so excited to finally share the title of The Price of Magic: Book 2. ‘A Wind from the Rift’ was my working title, but frankly, it just suited the book, so we decided to keep it. I think it has a cool, slightly vintage feel, like maybe it was written by Robin Hobb or Robert Jordan (basically, a better author than me).

‘A Wind from the Rift’ is scheduled to launch on 19 November 2020. In the current COVID environment, that might be subject to change, but so far it’s looking good. Two books out in one year! What a busy bee I am.

I’ll be revealing the cover and the blurb a little later, and my mailing list subscribers will be the first to see them. Haven’t signed up yet? Pop your email address in below. I send an email about once every two months, so you don’t have to worry about getting spammed. I’m too lazy for that. Also, if you’re on Instagram, shoot me a DM and I’ll add you to my close friends list! It’s for mailing list subscribers only so it’s very exclusive.

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Pitching your Novel: Part II https://bonniewynne.com/2020/06/21/pitching-your-novel-part-ii/ Sun, 21 Jun 2020 09:55:36 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1349 Out of the trenches and onto the battlefield: it’s time for the all-important synopsis.

For this part, you’ll need to look closely at your agent/publisher’s submission guidelines. Some may want a 500 word summary. Some may want 2,000. You’ll need to tailor your response to suit. Sending 5,000 words when they ask for 500 is a sure way to demonstrate that you’re either too lazy to read, or think the rules don’t apply to you. If you’re Stephen King, that may be true, but if you’re a first-time author, don’t give them any reason to reject you up-front. Plenty of time for rejection later!

So here’s the synopsis that got me my deal. In the right-hand column, I break down why I’ve constructed it this way, and what you should be looking for in your own synopsis.

Important: I know not everybody has read The Ninth Sorceress yet. A synopsis isn’t like a blurb: it should give away your ending. So, because I don’t want to spoil my book for people who haven’t read it, I’ve redacted the sentences that give away major plot points. There are some mild spoilers below, but basically just what you would find in the blurb, or guess within the first few chapters.

The Synopsis

Who is the prisoner, chained in the blackest dungeon of the Clockwork City—and why are the wizards so afraid of her?

Sixteen-year-old Gwyn traverses the snow-blasted High Country in a peddler’s wagon, hawking potions and alchemical cures. Her guardian hides her from the world like a dark secret, and cowed from years of stern discipline, she knows better than to push for answers. But with the arrival of a Syndicate wizard, Gwyn is propelled into a desperate struggle for survival. The goddess Beheret has marked her out, and her mysterious uncle, Idris, may be the only one who knows why.

Aided by new allies—the exiled shapeshifter Lucian, and Faolan, a capricious necromancer who once loved her uncle—Gwyn heads north, to Idris’s hidden stronghold. She is pursued by Syndicate wizards, their magic-sniffing hounds, and a stranger in a silver mask who calls her Yennevere—but what really frightens her is the secret Faolan reveals. Gwyn has a dark magic of her own, if she dares harness it. Now she must discover the line between seeking safety and seeking power, in a world that hates her for what she is.

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Opening with a question is a good bet, because it makes the reader automatically feel invested in the outcome. They’ll probably read the whole synopsis, at least.

Age and gender of protagonist = who the book will be marketed towards.

Describing the setup before the INCITING INCIDENT. The ordinary world – the character’s mindset and motivation before everything changes.

And this is the inciting incident. What destroys the ordinary world and propels the protagonist into the world of the story?

What’s at stake in the early conflict of the book? In this case, Gwyn’s survival. Bigger-picture conflict and stakes come later.

Setting up the larger conflict – antagonist, central mystery, character goals.

Describing the other important characters in a few words. If they’re not POV characters, don’t spend too long on them – just something memorable/pertinent. TNS readers will note that I don’t mention Severine or Alcide. They don’t have major plot roles in Book 1, so there’s no need to talk about them.

Obstacles, conflicts, high and low points. Don’t need to go into huge detail with every battle, capture, escape etc. – just the meat of the story.

Describe the internal struggle of the novel in one or two sentences. What does your character want? Remember: your synopsis is not just a dry recitation of things that happen. What is it ABOUT? What’s the key theme?

Stakes – Why should we care? What happens if the protagonist fails?

Establishing a sense of urgency and peril. One chance to the save the world!

End on a high note. Big drama, big stakes. You want the reader to go “ooo, that sounds exciting.”

So that’s it: your synopsis. Actually, that was my synopsis. Yours will be different.

If you haven’t read The Ninth Sorceress yet, why not pick up a copy? It’s also available on audiobook, so my story of twisted blood magic can lull you into a gentle sleep every night.

For more writing and publishing tips, don’t forget to subscribe to my mailing list! I won’t spam you, or sell your details to foreign powers, but you may get some exclusive bonus content piped straight into your inbox. Love that for you.

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Pitching your Novel: Part I https://bonniewynne.com/2020/06/14/pitching-your-novel-part-i/ Sun, 14 Jun 2020 10:23:41 +0000 https://bonniewynne.com/?p=1341 I know a lot of my readers are aspiring writers themselves. Some just do it for fun or as a hobby. If that’s you, this post may be irrelevant to your interests.

But some of you want to turn your writing into a career. That means approaching agents and publishers, hat in hand, trying to make them take a chance and invest their time and money in your unproven story.

Yeah — we all hate this part. Writing a book is one thing, but selling that book is a whole other game. A crappy game. You can write the best and most exciting novel on the planet, but until you can craft a pitch that makes an agent or publisher want to read it…. well, it won’t make a lick of difference.

Here’s where I come in. Without further ado, I present: the cover letter that got me in the door with Talem Press.

Disclaimer: I won’t pretend to be any kind of expert on this stuff. And I don’t claim that my approach was perfect, or the only way, or even the best way. But hey, it worked, and that counts for something. I invite you to take this example and build on it. Make yours better! I believe in you.

The Cover Letter

Dear Talem Press,

I read on your website that you’re looking for stories with ‘unlikely heroines, mysterious magic and out-of-this-world story-telling.’ I think my novel might be right up your alley! Like Talem, I’m Sydney-based, new on the publishing scene, and passionate about stories that amaze, empower and inspire. This manuscript has not been seen by any other agents or publishers—ever!

The Price of Magic is a female-oriented young adult (or adult) speculative fiction novel complete at 120,000 words. It can stand alone or as the first in a planned series. Combining epic coming-of-age fantasy with modern genetics and space travel, it would appeal to fans of Isobelle Carmody’s Obernewtyn Chronicles, R. F. Kuang’s The Poppy War,  or Sarah J. Maas’s Throne of Glass series.

If you know the name of the person you’re contacting, use it. Otherwise, generic is fine.

A personalised sentence or two that shows you’ve read the submission guidelines. Let the publisher/agent know you genuinely want to work with them and you’re not just sending out your application scattershot to every publisher in the country.

Good spot to create a connection, if you have some common ground with the agent/publisher. If you spoke to them at a panel or open house, etc, this is a good time to mention it.

If there’s a specific reason why you’re the perfect person to tell this story, mention it here! Do you have some unique experiences or background? Is it an #ownvoices story? Does it relate to something you’ve studied or lived through? I had nothing particular, so I just talked about what kind of stories I love. You may be able to do better than me here!

Obviously don’t say this if it’s not true. But you can mention that you’ve just started querying this month, or whatever. If you say you’ve been querying this book for twelve years, they’ll obviously wonder why nobody has picked it up yet. (If you have been querying for twelve years, don’t say anything).

Basic housekeeping: genre, word count, series potential.

Lol, I ended up dropping all this during edits. The novel you’re selling may not be the novel they end up buying! Don’t be too attached to anything that comes out of your brain.

Comparison titles! These are super important. You have to pick something that shows you know the genre (so not just the biggest and most well-known book in the genre). Don’t compare yourself to Harry Potter or another multi-billion-dollar series. Also, make sure at least one, or preferably all, of your comp titles are recent (last few years). Pick something you think might have a similar audience/readership/market performance as your book. I picked one that had similar content (Obernewtyn), a recent comp (Poppy War), and a blue-sky pick that showed the potential audience (fans of X might also like my book). I could have picked better ones honestly.

And there we have it: the cover letter. Short, snappy, and to the point. At this point, all you’re really trying to demonstrate is:

  • You’re not a psychopath.
  • You’ve read the submission guidelines and can follow them.
  • Your story is potentially appropriate in its content, word count and genre (no 200,000 word sadist erotica to the fluffy romance publisher, please).
  • You are literate. Check for typos!
  • There is a market for the kind of story you’re pitching, and you the author understand that market.

But as you probably know, the cover letter is only the first step. Join me next time for the all-important synopsis. Summing up a 120,000 word book in a few hundred words? What could be easier?

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